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Post by PAs_HumanTorch on Jun 25, 2009 8:46:23 GMT -5
Looks great man! I really like that black, it's cool you got a goal to pursue so go for it!!
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Post by EL-SCORPION419 on Jun 25, 2009 10:04:57 GMT -5
not bad Chris, I would remove the bevel from the card though. and I would actually straighten out the reflection. I know your going for that angled look but if the corners don't align at the bottom it doesn't look right. if you skewed the reflection so that the corners met the corners of the actual card then it would be cool.
other than that I am not a huge fan of the font (because of the missing 'holes' in the lettering) but the colors and paint brush graphics are spot on along with the placement of the info. overall 7 of 10 with some minor touching up.
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Post by PAs_SABRE on Jun 25, 2009 12:34:33 GMT -5
I appreciate that Scorp!
Yeah I made the displays in less than a minute so I didn't really think about shifting the perspective of the card to match. I sent them to him as a .psd so he didn't even see the display.
I'll post the others when I make them, I'd love for you to keep the feedback coming!
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Post by [SHO] G00SE-11 on Aug 7, 2009 14:59:19 GMT -5
Hi,
I haven't been around in a while, but was stopping in and saw this. I wanted to tell you it looks very good!
I am by no means a professional (yet) but, if I may make a few suggestions. I agree with most everything Scorp said. If the reflection was lined up it would be great. As for the bevel I don't think its a bad idea because it gives the card some realistic volume, but I think it needs to be much smaller by decreasing the depth and the pixel size. One thing that really bothered me is the brown rectangle with the text "Graphic Designer". The edge appears like its hanging off the beveled edge, a lot like a sticker that is peeling off. Fixing the bevel as I suggested earlier may help the problem. If not a bump to the left should make it look good.
Nice work. The middle graphic with the paintbrush is really nice.
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